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Wednesday, December 22, 2010

posture

i closed my laptop
i rang a friend
i cried

my friend and i walked
we talked about memory and atheism
we smoked

our tofu was silken and delicious
we did not finish our food
we left a $3.60 tip

we are the same kind of interested in each other

4 comments:

  1. this is really lovely.

    It was good to see you the other day! sorry about awkwardly having to get off train as soon as i saw you.
    Hope you have a merry christmas :)

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  2. i like this. i felt very calm while reading/rereading it.

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  3. love how you tagged this bad poetry too. actually, it's not bad at all

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  4. thanks ya'll.

    Twas nice seeing you too Tilly! It's hard to maintain general elegance when the threat of being captured on a train is involved - I understand the difficulty! You enjoy your 'festive' season too =)

    I use the tag bad poetry when I feel angry with myself about the emotions I'm expressing or am unhappy with myself. Also it's a safeguard, just in case other people really do dislike it.

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